Before this we have learn about The introductury paragraph which is:
1.The hook-7type
2.Transition-connect with the hook and thesis
3.Thesis
So next,we learn about body paragraph.Before that Miss Zue ask us about the different about Introduction and body paragraph.
UNITY!!!
#we cannot write the topic that not in paragraph(thesis)
#we can use question
#every supporting detailed must relevant with the topic sentences.
Example of paragraph structure
1.One of the reason why i want to become a firefighter is because i'm interested in the science and technique of putting of fires.
2.The greatest reward in working as a teacher is watching students become more empowered as a result of what they learn.
3.Watching television can be a bad habit because it could prevent you from spending time with your children,exercising and building strong relationships with those around you.
rewrite: One of the bad impact of watching television because it could prevent you from spending time with your children.
* --> topic sentences
CONCLUSION
# Can use question.
#can give prediction.
#can end with question.
1.Transition signal
-in the conclusion/in a nutshell,as a conclusion
2.writing back the thesis statement use different word.
Example:
In the nutshell,poverty can be improbved by using lot of ways and the poors should not give up in order to achieve our dreams.Our society can live much better than yesterday if they know how to use the benefits that had been given from the government.Government should play an important role to curb this poverty issues among our community.Like saying goes ''prevention is better than cure'' Not just that,we should not underestimate and categorize people based on their ways of life.Instead we should think ahead in order to change our life's fate.
* Thesis statement
* Prevention
* Recomendation
* Quotation
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